Today, all of the people have access to the internet;
It is very common in all the
houses and also in public places find wi-fi. The internet offer a variety of
functions, makes it easy to search for information, communication between the
people and even there are people who work from their homes through the internet,
It is as the basis of “Globalization”. But this tool has good and bad things,
advantages and disadvantages.
In the advantages we can mention about the
facilities that the internet offer us. It is easy and faster be able to
obtain information of all kinds, know other cultures and persons of the
foreigner, it facilitates the communication among the persons, for this the
instantaneous communication exists across social networks, post office, etc. It
allows to obtain a wide vision of what happens in the world, in ours around.
But on the other hand they find the
disadvantages, which can manage to influence of bad form the utilization of the
Internet. Nowadays privacy is had very small, due to the use of the social,
such networks, as Facebook. On the other hand one we finds the use of the chats
to know someone for this way, which is not known the one who is really. The
above mentioned is very complicated especially by the children of 12 - 15 year
old that shut in themselves in his houses to talk with strangers, which can
manage to create serious problems. Also to this age one gives that the children
already do not have social life with his couples of way presence, increases the
loneliness and individualism.
In general, the Internet brings both advantages
and disadvantages but to me to seem, the disadvantages come to very complicated
limits.
Hi Josefa, I agree with your opinion about the internet and I believe that teenagers try to live more inside the Internet than in the real life and we have to add the change suffered (physical and emotional in that periods results in a very complicated situation.
ResponderEliminarRegrads
I think the instantaneous communication is not always good thing because we become in persons dependent to the speed and they lose the value of wait, like in the letters by mail that I think have a charm that currently we can't enjoy
ResponderEliminarInternet communication, the use of social networks, chats and others, in my opinion, keep people from having real contact between them. I say this because often occurs that in a meeting, a party or out with friends, the young are more pending notifications on facebook that have contact with those around them.
ResponderEliminarJosefa,
ResponderEliminarWC: 291. Fine. You could get a much better result in your writing if you dedicated more time to edit your text extensively. Some parts are hard to get. please pay attention to these obs.;
It is very common to find WI-FI in all the houses and also in public places (find wi-fi). The internet offerS a variety of functions,IT makes it easy to
In the advantages we can mention (about) the facilities? that the internet offerS us.
… and (persons of the foreigner) FOREIGN PEOPLE ,
., post office??? NO! E-MAIL .
… in ours around? AROUND US?.
…THERE ARE (they find) the disadvantages, which can manage to influence (of bad form) the (utilization) USE of the Internet. Nowadays privacy( is had very small),
…(social, such networks, as Facebook)??
. On the other hand one we find(s ) the use of the chats
…which is not known the one who is really.YOU DON’T KNOW WHO THE PERSON REALLY IS …
… especially (by) FOR ( the) children of 12 - 15 yearS OF AGE ( old ) that shut in themselves in (his) THEIR houses to talk with strangers,
…to this age one gives that the children already do not have social life with his couples of way presence, increases the loneliness and individualism.(UNCLEAR)
but to me to seem, the disadvantages come to very complicated limits. (UNCLEAR)
Cheers,